tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post72505961329126840..comments2023-10-29T17:56:58.797+05:30Comments on कहानी-कलश: कम्पनी-राज ः गौरव सोलंकीगिरिराज जोशीhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13316021987438126843noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-7196794662972224242017-07-27T20:07:24.678+05:302017-07-27T20:07:24.678+05:30बहुत खूब गौरव, पर मेरे हिसाब से यहाँ उस दोपहर को ल...बहुत खूब गौरव, पर मेरे हिसाब से यहाँ उस दोपहर को लेनिन की जगह "मार्क्स" होते तो माज़रा और भी ज्यादा उफनकर सामने आता।<br /><br />खैर, एक उम्दा कहानी के लिए बधाई।बृजमोहन स्वामी 'बैरागी'https://www.blogger.com/profile/17944715570034110962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-47087824988508701442017-07-27T20:05:24.521+05:302017-07-27T20:05:24.521+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.बृजमोहन स्वामी 'बैरागी'https://www.blogger.com/profile/17944715570034110962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-61109715760008147192017-07-26T01:23:59.082+05:302017-07-26T01:23:59.082+05:30Achhi likhi hai bhaaisaab.Achhi likhi hai bhaaisaab.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03804684980807258103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-84182913325605764652013-01-26T19:00:52.693+05:302013-01-26T19:00:52.693+05:30bhai gaurav mujhe to yeh kahani padhne mein bahot ...bhai gaurav mujhe to yeh kahani padhne mein bahot dimag lagana pada, bahot uljhav hai baat kuchh nahi .. proper end nahin hua .. mere hisaab se .. baaki tum log to buddhijivi ho hi..hum to shramjivi hain<br />..all d best ..<br />ARUN SHEKHARhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09332265107146875010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-47137994085278242082012-11-16T07:08:35.652+05:302012-11-16T07:08:35.652+05:30This story is realistic but sick and prejudiced..i...This story is realistic but sick and prejudiced..i am a Hindu girl from Ayodhya..married with a white American...they are also human beings with salty tears, sweet emotions and love for grandma and babies and dogs...and yes Gaurav can be so raw and naked in expression og precise emotions of any given moment, specially of a person who has witnessed the core transformation og his/her soul beacause of overexposure and globalization but can not change the core values and double standards of society or basic human nature...Gaurav is awesome writer but the story makes me disappointed...way to go Gaurav.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01033780449731635304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-58733880706915483522012-07-10T22:04:36.323+05:302012-07-10T22:04:36.323+05:30aapki kahani kalpnaonka adbhut mail hay ajaykumar ...aapki kahani kalpnaonka adbhut mail hay ajaykumar dube jhansiDUBEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15340903108486151204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-33975343603254678482012-07-10T22:03:38.644+05:302012-07-10T22:03:38.644+05:30aapki kahani kalpnaonka adbhut mail hay ajaykumar ...aapki kahani kalpnaonka adbhut mail hay ajaykumar dube jhansiDUBEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15340903108486151204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-71962495998352542011-11-04T15:36:54.670+05:302011-11-04T15:36:54.670+05:30gaurav selsh ka ek purana chamcha he.... kuchh bhi...gaurav selsh ka ek purana chamcha he.... kuchh bhi likh kar naam pana uska dhandha he..... <br /><br />aaj kal selseh se nahi banti uski paisa nhi deta aur selseh nahi chaapta uski kahanee .....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-13635488409317554722011-06-18T16:31:18.917+05:302011-06-18T16:31:18.917+05:30dear gaurav solanki i like your story of company r...dear gaurav solanki i like your story of company raj its realy a very realistic story but try to best in this type of story some basic things which can not be expressed by a common man so that it can convert you a great story writer to a common manarunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10678598475406284049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-91994488984380357132010-11-30T19:26:58.706+05:302010-11-30T19:26:58.706+05:30आखिरी पंक्ति से शुरू करें, तो बात ज्यादा मुनासिब ल...आखिरी पंक्ति से शुरू करें, तो बात ज्यादा मुनासिब लगती है...इस कहानी के साथ भी वैसा ही है, उलझे हुए झोलों के बीच अच्छी झालर बुनी गई है...ये मेरा पूर्वाग्रह नहीं क्योंकि कहानी से पहले कहानीकार का नाम पढ़ता हूं...हरबार की तरह तो शायद नहीं, लेकिन, एकबार फिर अद्भुत!!!आलोक साहिलhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07273857599206518431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5724241726450852727.post-88711983772379884292010-06-29T12:59:04.080+05:302010-06-29T12:59:04.080+05:30gaurav solanki is back.gaurav ji bahut din baad hi...gaurav solanki is back.gaurav ji bahut din baad hindyugm par aaye lekin pahale wali dhar nahi hai. raviAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com